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Just how important is editing?

24/3/2013

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So, is editing your work important? HOW important?
Not at all
A little
Quite
Very
Vital
In my opinion, it's absolutely vital that you get a professional edit on your work.
This week I've read samples of a few ebooks on Amazon. The glaring errors I've seen in the first few lines, let alone pages, were enough to turn me away from the idea of buying the book.
I listen to my friends' recommendations and some of these books were advertised by sharing on Facebook - not all, but some were. I have seen ludicrous mistakes that shouldn't have been made in the first place and then shouldn't have got past any editor worth his or her salt.
Self-diluted for self deluded springs instantly to mind. Pacific for specific - I know, I hear it in speech and I want to tear their tongue out but I can't bear to buy a book knowing beforehand that I'm going to be angry, frustrated and critical at every page I turn.
Then there's also the issue of anomalies in the story itself. A guy trapped in a car that is sinking in a deep river. He blows out the window, pulls himself out of the car and kicks to the surface where he emerges in time to see the roof of the car sink below the surface - huh? Was he under the water or not? Perhaps he was driving a double-decker bus? I saw the scene as the car being level as he escaped it and swam to the surface but how could that be if he then saw the roof disappearing below the water? Again, if that's on the first page, I couldn't bear to read on.
These are silly little errors, easily picked up on when in the proofreading, beta reading and editing stage, but once it's published, the glaring errors are there for everyone to see - especially on Amazon preview.
My point here is that someone should have picked up on those errors and pointed them out to the writer. If they have been pointed out and the writer decided to keep them, then fair enough, there's only one person to blame.

The point of this post is that either self-published or published by a small, independent publishing house, an Indie Author has so many obstacles already in his or her way before even typing one word. There are still stigmas attached to all indie publishing methods - if you're not published by a recognised publishing house or even one of the 'big six' then you're not really an author of any worth. For example, the BBC has a competition running at the moment but because my publisher uses POD (Print On Demand) I am barred from the competition.
There is still massive elitism, snobbery and discrimination. The world of publishing is difficult to get into and yet, if you grab the bull by the horns and do it yourself, your work has no worth, it's scorned. I am not alone in trying to get people to sit up and take notice of self-published, small press published and Indie published writers, there are many organisations out there trying to help the 'cause' - The Historical Novel Society to name but one. But when an 'Indie' Author puts out inferior, unedited work then not only is he/she letting him/herself down, it's letting us ALL down because the phrase "self-published" is thrown around as an insult. Sometimes it's well deserved but not always and those authors who are getting clued up, having their work edited, to put out professional looking books are being dragged down to that level. It's impossible to bring something up where it doesn't belong or deserve to be but it's far too easy to drag everything else down.

So from one Indie Author to another, do yourself a favour and get help with your work. You'll do the Indie Publishing world a favour too.



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Evil Genius seeks minions...

20/3/2013

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That's a fabulous ad isn't it? It's full of humour and potential. What's the story behind it? There could be many different stories, the movie industry is full of such tales and I remember a few cartoon series from my kids' childhood with the same theme: Pinkie and the Brain and Dexter's Lab to name just two.
I recently took a promotion in my work - I promoted myself to Evil Genius at the Eighth Circle of Hell. I deserve the promotion, I earned it and I'm going to keep it, by hook or by crook.
Why do I deserve such a title? Am I evil? No, not really but I can appear to be so - when the occasion arises. I have a sharp tongue - or put another way: I say what I feel. I have a sharp and ready wit - again, another way of saying that I say what I think. Sometimes it may seem harsh but mostly it's meant to be amusing (at least to me). Does that make me a bitch? In some opinions, probably - but, I like the phrase: When I want your opinion, I'll remove the duct tape.
I like the darker side of life, it has its own splashes of colour and humour if you know where to look.
Mayhem and chaos have their own hints of amusing symmetry with 'the real world' - the story of lads who stole the numberplate from a Speed Camera van, put it on their own car and got the van 17 tickets is chaos, it's based in a place where rules are broken rather than adhered to. "Borrow a thousand and worry about making the payments. Borrow a million, let them worry" is another favourite saying of mine. Again, humour found in bucking the system, sticking it to 'the man'. We'd all like the idea of natural justice when it comes right down to it, but that would certainly lead right back to the dark ages where we struggled to emerge from.
But would 'natural justice' serve us? I see an awful lot of rescue sites in social media, they have animals at their heart and look to their best interests above even their own. Is that a bad thing? In my opinion, no, it's not but it doesn't stop the abuse of animals. That's where natural justice might come in handy. The people who use dogs for sport - dog fighting etc, if they were shoved in a cage, starved and beaten until they became so angry, confused and desperate to escape that they would fight anything put in front of them, would that be 'fair and just' treatment? We'd only need to do it to one or two, word would soon get around... but that's mayhem speaking.
Those young men who gang raped and videoed their attack on a young girl - are they evil? The media would have us believing that they are the victims not her. Now, if you're looking for some real evil, there it is.
So, back to it... am I evil? No, I'm chaos and mayhem. Evil is doing harm and laughing about it. Evil is destroying a young woman's life and crying in court in the hope of mercy. Evil is denying a rapist did anything wrong, evil is blaming the victim. Natural justice, as one of my friends has said, would be for those two (and all the other rapists) to be flung in a cell occupied by well endowed men more powerful than they are and left to their sentence.
I could be terribly 'evil' given the power and half a chance. I'd set right all the wrongs I could see and then go searching for more. Would I abuse the power? Well... here's another saying:

Power corrupts. Absolute power corrupts absolutely.


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Where does 'Inspiration' come from?

12/3/2013

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Last year I went to Spain for a week's break. The break had a purpose however, it didn't matter what the weather was like (it was glorious). It didn't matter what the night-life was life (we had a hot-tub). All I wanted was a whole week with my husband and my notebook (small lap-top).
I went there to continue with the stories about Dusty and Red - I ended up neglecting those two and creating a whole new character - Celtica Diamond.
There are a few things different with Celtica, she's hard as nails - as are Dusty and Red.
She's feisty, kick-ass, takes no nonsense... - same as Red and Dusty... but there's something else.

She doesn't live in England, she lives in a city not a small village/town and she's very happy living at the top of the apartment building - very unlike Dusty and Red.

But back to the title of the blog... where does inspiration come from?
Well, with Celtica, I was lazing in bed in a luxury apartment, chatting with my husband about what I was going to write.
At the side of the bed there were a few switches. I got curious as I was musing about writing.
*click* the lights in the bathroom came on - cool!
*click* the lights in the bedroom came on.
*click* *clunky whirring sound* "What the hell is that?"
The security shutters began rolling up to let in the glorious sunshine and the view of the sea.
Then I started thinking. "Those shutters would stop a zombie attack when the apocalypse arrives. Then I thought some more... they'd not just stop zombies... but what if the shutters were high up in the penthouse suite of an apartment block? Why would anyone need or want such heavy duty shutters? Vampire prevention? Yes, but the shutters wouldn't be enough...
I grabbed my dressing gown and notebook, plugged it in in the dining room and began typing.
The story that came to me is what I was working on when we went to Egypt for a week, in February. I didn't write as many words but I did have more distractions.
Celtica is very different, she has moved away from her family to live a solitary life in a huge city. She misses her family of course, but there are so many things to keep her mind occupied that she doesn't get time to mourn the fact. Too many things, like vampires, werewolves, faeries and other creatures. Her time as a Paranormal Detective is eaten up and she is making sure that she isn't...

Here's an excerpt... I hope you like her as much

The occupant of the penthouse suite, (the one with the full-on security shutters, remember) strolled down the stairs in a long, elegant black gown. She wore her dark brunette hair loose and it cascaded down her back in what seemed like jewelled, silken hanks with flashes of mahogany and red sifted in. Her hair had a deep and healthy shine that drew admiring glances from men and women alike and she had been approached by more than one hair care product manufacturer to pose as their hair girl. She had, of course, declined every offer.

She was athletic and when wearing clothes that were cut to cling to her curves, her musculature could clearly be seen if an observer could tear his gaze from her mesmerising dark eyes. Of all her physical qualities, her eyes were the feature that held attention and kept drawing the admirer back. Some described her eyes as hypnotic, spellbinding, compelling and she always played on her best features. Her eye make-up was dark and dramatic; she was playing them up this evening.

“Good evening, Miss Diamond,” the Security Guy said.

“Good evening Mike. I wonder if you could scare up a taxi for me please?” Her smile was genuine and she knew very well that Mike had a thing for her, but as long as he kept it hidden and never ever tried to make anything more of it, he was a valuable member of the building’s staff and she was fine with that.

“Of course,” he said and pressed a button under the desk to alert the other Security Guy outside.

She stood a little way from the desk that Mike sat behind until she was informed that a taxi was waiting for her. She didn’t want to give Mike any wrong impressions of friendship. He knew the score and didn’t try to engage her in conversation as she waited.

“Your taxi is outside,” Mike said. “Have a good evening.”

She thanked him and went outside. She heard him greet another resident as she left the building. He used the exact same tone as he had with her. She smiled, Mike was a professional.

He probably didn’t realise but her opinion of him was the only one that mattered. He was employed by the security firm that she owned. Miss Diamond was the one that had dreamed up the concept of a building with the security so high that even the mice were screened. She wanted ultimate security in her home and when she couldn’t find a company that lived up to the high standards that she required, she made one.

The taxi arrived at the hotel that she had asked to be taken to. It wasn’t the exact location she needed but she wanted to make whoever it was that was tailing her, work for it.

She slipped past the surprised concierge with a nod and a smile and went to the elevators. She selected three different floors when the doors closed.

When the doors opened for the second time on floor nineteen, she punched the buttons for another two floors and stepped out of the elevator. She walked to the end of the corridor and turned left towards the rear of the building. There was a fire escape there but instead of slipping through that door, she took advantage of another door, one of the hotel’s rooms, opening on her left. She pushed the door wide, barged past a very surprised couple and went through their room to the window. The view was wonderful - if you like a high rise vista of another hotel in front of you and an alley filled with trash cans below. She opened the window, ignoring the shouts of anger from the disgruntled couple. She leaned out of the window and looked down into the alley then turned to throw a couple of hundred dollar bills on the bed, wink at the couple and then she put a forefinger to her lips. “Shhhh!” she said and she leaped out of the window. She heard the shouts of outrage turn to alarm as she dropped, she heard the window close behind her and then she heard nothing but the wind rushing past her ears.

Miss Diamond, wealthy heiress, philanthropist, single, beautiful and a very enigmatic young woman stepped from the trash-strewn alley as though it was a mansion. She walked a few more blocks, making certain that she had lost her pursuer and then went to her real destination.

The charity ball at the Waldorf would benefit tremendously from her excellent humour this evening.

The one that had attempted to tail her would not. His body - or most of it - would never be discovered. Her only regret was that she hadn’t figured out who or what he was.



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What's in a name?

8/3/2013

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There would seem to be a lot of importance attached to a person's name - or more to the point, the nickname that most people know them as. Mine has always been 'Trouble' - yes, seriously. I've always been referred to as 'Trouble' from my earliest memories.
"Oh-oh, here comes Trouble..." Even now.
How did I get the name?
How did it become common knowledge?
How does EVERYONE know I'll answer to it?
I have NO idea! It's a total mystery to me!
Even my kids giggle, they give 'knowing looks' whenever they hear it. I can glare at them all I want, it makes no difference.
I tried to acquire a cool nickname for myself but it never happened. I was called 'Ginger' 'Gingernut' 'Carrot-top' and even, perversely, 'Blue' (yeah, it's Australian).
The one enduring name that I have NEVER introduced myself as yet sticks like glue is 'Trouble'...

I have no alternative then but to live up to it.


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My AWESOME career

6/3/2013

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I say this quite often, I'm not ashamed to keep repeating myself, nor do I ever get tired of hearing myself say it:
I love my life!
I really do. Sure there are stressful and worrying times, times when I wonder what happens next or 'why did that happen?' but for the vast majority of the time, I really do love my life. I'm a very fortunate person, I believe. Who can say that they truly enjoy their work, their career and their job? Mine encompasses my love of writing, so I'm set. I get to be creative and to mix with creative people. I'm surrounded by a wealth of exceptionally talented, kind and generous people and if that's not lucky, I don't know what is.
A good friend of mine says you make your own luck, I suppose that's true. "You get back what you put out there..." - yes, that's true too. But really, honestly and truthfully, I do feel exceptionally LUCKY to have had the opportunities come my way for me to grab hold of.
Last month I grabbed the chance to go away on a family break. We went to Egypt - no, not the pyramids etc, that would have been a hard slog, we went for a relaxing break. It wasn't the best holiday we've ever had but it was enough to recharge batteries and as it turned out, I really needed mine recharging - especially in light of what I came home to!
Because of the Egypt trip, AWESOME Magazine was out late this month (no, not that it went partying and didn't get back til the early hours) I missed the deadline for publication and the Team worked like Trojans to get it out. I expected it to be available for the weekend, well it is! It went live yesterday (Tuesday). Now, that's a great feeling, seeing what you've achieved being shared and passed around on Facebook and Twitter and the like. I couldn't have done it on my own of course, I have a wonderful and supportive team at my side - when it became clear that it was going to be delayed, the offers of help came flooding in - that's the AWESOME team for you.
The magazine looks amazing. I don't know what happened to make it a little bit more special this month, but something did and I'm getting comments complimenting me on how great it's looking - well, it wasn't just me, it's never just me. I cannot do all that work on my own.

Here we go then:
Eirian Cohen
Rachel Malone
Melissa Hollett
Jack Burrows

and of course
Phil Gardiner

All of these people are unselfish, generous friends who have no concept of 9-5 working and I appreciate everything that they have to offer because they are HUGELY talented, passionate people who have no qualms when it comes to giving of themselves.

Yep, I'm a lucky, lucky person. I love my life!



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